Finished part 2. Really great! Lots more tension and the story is tighter. Great stuff with Diver.
Saturday, May 8, 2010
Revising: Down to the Wire!
New Title for Part 2 of Grace ( fits new plot)
PART 2: WHEREABOUTS UNKNOWN
Bellhaven, Long Island
June 1970
Casualty: Any person who is lost...by having been declared dead, duty status-whereabouts unknown, missing, ill, or injured.
—Department of Defense, Dictionary of Military Terms
Acid is not for every brain.
—Timothy Leary
PART 2: WHEREABOUTS UNKNOWN
Bellhaven, Long Island
June 1970
Casualty: Any person who is lost...by having been declared dead, duty status-whereabouts unknown, missing, ill, or injured.
—Department of Defense, Dictionary of Military Terms
Acid is not for every brain.
—Timothy Leary
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